Marlon’s Adventure

One time I went to the beach.  I went for a walk to the pier.  While  I was walking I looked for shells.  I found a red shell, I picked it up.

It was actually a hermit crab.

Hermit Crab

Ouch! I got a claw mark on my hand.  I kept on walking, my hand hurt.  Next, I found a dead clam.  I opened it.  It had a  little pearl inside it!!

A Little Pearl

I treasured it, but I kept on walking.  I finally got to the pier.  I went to rent a boat.  I went out into the ocean.  A storm started, big waves splashed on to my boat.

My Little Boat

It almost drowned me.  I knew that I was doomed.  A wave hit me and I fainted.  I woke up on a tropical island.  I found a banana and ate it.  I explored the island .  I found pieces of wood.  I made a raft and explored the ocean.  I found a treasure chest!!

And I returned home….

The End.

By Marlon Murray




2 Responses to “Marlon’s Adventure”

  1. Jana says:

    My 8 Year Old Wrote Me A Story :) Marlon's Adventure http://bit.ly/dfDrUP

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